GRE 考试|GRE英语作文笔记(二)

1. skim the question and write the introduction

2. input^{1 the TOPic sentence.找出问题所在，一个问题一句话}

3. develop the body paragraphs one by one.逐一展开问题段落，按重要程度递减的规律展开

4. conclusion（略）

5. checking

2、开头段的写作：

找出原论证的结论或倡导，指出原论证的论据和假设，指出原论证的逻辑错误。

忠实的保留原始信息。用我们的词保留原始信息。

In this argument / analysis, the arguer concludes / claims thatTo support / justify^{2 the conclusion , the arguer points out / provides the evidence thatand thatIn addition , the arguer reasons（推理）that}

This argument suffers from several critical fallacies / flaws.

3、SURVEY问题：

1. vague = misleading （majority, percent, base number, few, many）

2. question: what questions will ask in the survey? Loaded questions有误导性的问题

3. Who

4. Average平均数不合适于每一个成员

5. Confusing causal relationship with correlation^{3混淆因果关系与有关性}

Every causal relationship implies a correlation, but the statistical^{4 correlation does not necessarily implies a causal relation.}

6. When was the survey conducted?

7. Are respondents（授调查者）being forthright（直率，说真话）? Image men / essence men

闪光句型:

1. the arguer over simplifies the issue of

2. the arguer unfairly assumes that

3. the arguer fails takesintosaccount other factors that

4. the procedure of the survey might be problematic.