我是一个初中一年级的学生写了一篇日记：我的一天。有语法错误吗？请老师评判一下。
I get up at six in the morning. Then I have wash my face and brush my teeth. After that I had a quick beakfest. NextI go to school. I have four lessons in the morning. After classes is over, I go home. I have lunch at 12:00. I have three lessons to learn in the afternoon . I went to home at 5:00. Ihave done homework at home. Finary I goto bed at ten in the evening. thiss all my a day.
I get up at six in the morning. Then I have wash my face and brush my teeth. After that I had a quick beakfest. NextI go to school. I have four lessons in the morning. After classes is over, I go home. I have lunch at 12:00. I have three lessons to learn in the afternoon. I went to home at 5:00. Ihave done homework at home. Finary I goto bed at ten in the evening. thiss all my a day. （红色部分为错误或不足）
修改如下（尽可能维持原样）：
I get up at six in the morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. After that I have a quick beakfest. Next I go to school. I have four lessons in the morning. After class, I go home. I have lunch at 12:00. In the afternoonI have three lessons to learn （本句把in the afternoon 提到句首，让句子富有变化）. I go home at 5:00. I do homework at home. Finally I goto bed at ten in the evening. Thatsmy whole day.
