实战篇
造福无数人的mumuwa的南丁格尔篇解析示例:
1)Two recent publications offer different assessment1 of the career of the famous British nurse Florence Nightingale.(主题句,由此句和三段首句可知本文是结论讲解型文章,即特点是总分式)A book by Anne Summers(看法之一)seeks to debunk2 (负评价的实义动词)the idealizations and present a reality(正评价词)at odds3 with Nightingales heroic reputation. According to Summers, Nightingales importance during the Crimean War(和看法二比较的差别点) has been exaggerated(负评价的实义动词): not until near the wars end did she become supervisor4 of the female nurses.Additionally,(递进副词,表示行文方向一致,因此后面内容可以略读,仅提炼关键字即可,或不读)Summers writes that the contribution of the nurses to the relief of the wounded was at best marginal. The prevailing5 problems of military medicine were caused by army organizaitonal pratices, and the addition of a few nurses to the medical staff could be no more than symbolic6. Nightingales place in the national pantheon, Summers asserts, is lrgely due to the propagandistic efforts of contemporary newspaper reporters.(以上略读)
2)By contrast(要紧的强转折词,注意对比方/看法的差异点), the editors(对比看法二)of a new volume of Nightingales letters view Nightingale as a person who significantly influenced(正评价词) not only her own age but also subsequenct generations. They highlight her ongoing7 efforts to reform sanitary8 conditions after the war(看法二比较的差别点,和看法一中during the Crimean War对比,这一句是后面举例的概要句,要紧,了解概要句可以不需要看后面的例子。). For example,(举例一般可以略读,只提取例子中的关键字,如peacetime living conditions,举例的重要看前后的概要句,这里是for example 前面的一句话,由于例子都是用来讲明概要句的,只须了解概要句的意思就好了。)when she leanred that peacetime living conditions in British barracks were so horrible that the death rate of enlisted9 men far exeeded that of neighboring civilian10 populations, she succeeded in persuading the government to establish a Royal Commission on the Health of the Army. She used sums raised through public contributions to found a nurses traning hospital in London. Even in administrative11 matters, the editors assert, her practical intelligence was formidable: as recently as 1947 the British Armys medical services were still using the cosplayt-accounting system she had devised in the 1860s.(以上略读)
3)I believe that the evidence of her letters supports(正评价词) continued respect for Nightingales brillianceand creativity(正评价词). (概要句后举例说明,提取关键词,略读)When counseling a village schoolmaster to encourage children to use their faculties12 of observation, she sounds like a modern educator. Her insistence13 on classifying the problems of the needy14 in order to devise appropriate treatments is similar to the approach of modern social workers.(以上略读)In sum(文章最后一句话一般要仔细读,此处为概要句), although(让步略读,重点是让步后的转折句)Nightingale may not have achieved all of her goals during the Crimean War, her breadth of vision and ability to realize ambitious projects have earned(正评价词) her an eminent15(正评价词) place among the ranks of social pioneers.(重点读,表明作者对以上两个不同看法的评述)